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Wednesday 6 August 2014

Mango Taniwha (Great White Shark)

Mango Taniwha

I am a mango taniwha and I am looking for my next meal. I am gliding through the water when I sense the movement in something, I have a feeling the enemies are going to kill me for what I have done. Is this going to be my meal or is this going to be the end for me. All I saw was a human swimming away from something. I think he saw me. OMG he did see me so I will devour him whole and pretend nothing ever happened. Oh no I can see a boat coming towards me. I can see guns which are freaking me out. I will not let them come between me and my meal.

A while later the sound of war startled my ears and I began to run in fear as the gunshot sounds were getting louder and the boat was getting closer. I glide under the boat and rip apart the engine. The people on the boat suddenly start throwing spears into the water but that does not scare me at all. A while later I see my meal escaping but there is nothing I can do.

A minute later a man who looks like he is scared of me jumps into the water to see what has happened,but little does he know that I am waiting for him to get closer to me so that I can devour him whole. What the heck is he carrying ?, it looks so sharp but yet so small. I cannot believe what I am seeing. It looks like the jaw bone of my long lost brother. I am definitely going to shred him into pieces because of what he did to my brother.

Here I am swimming to what looks like my brothers killer getting ready to rip him into pieces. He spots me and he starts swimming towards the boat. But to his concern the boat has disappeared. I then swim after him. When I catch him I devour him and everyone on the shore close by stares in horror as I devour this stupid man for killing my brother. Who am I ?

This is my writing that is based on a sea creature that you want to write about.

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