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Monday 8 September 2014

Cook Strait Kate( Changed Ending )

Cook Strait Kate
Tangaroa the god of the sea watched over Kate Johns as she conquered Cook Strait preventing her from getting hurt. Kate on the other hand just kept on trying to swim to the end. As she finally reaches the end of her long trip she imagines a massive KFC family dinner meal and her munching away on it. Kate then ended up eating KFC and thinking what her next achievement would be. While she was thinking a headline bolted to the screen of the tv showing a man shouting out that youngsters can enter the 2004 Athens Olympics. Kate thought to herself and asked her dad if she could enter and the answer was a big fat yes.

Entering the olympics was so exciting for Kate. On her first race she was really put to the test by a Korean girl who was zooming past everyone and Kate had to keep her lead which seemed like trying to outrun Usain Bolt. She won her races and she raced all the way until she reached the swimming finals. She couldn't believe her eyes when she realised she was beating everyone and she had a chance to make history again but this time she would have made history by winning the olympics swimming category.

She was stunned to see that she got a chance to win either $10,000 or a visit to one of the most famous sports players like Maria Tutaia and Daniel Carter or even Shaun Johnson and Greg Inglis. Every year on the exact day that Kate Johns conquered Cook Strait Kate would celebrate with her family the time she set a world record of being the youngest to swim Cook Strait.

THE END

This is work that I have completed on my own which was trying to change the ending of the story we have read and the story that we have read is Cook Strait Kate. Take a look.

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