This is lovely piece of writing John. You have created some wonderful examples of metaphors although I'm not sure if your sisters will enjoy their descriptions :-) I think the figurative language you used to describe your mum is beautiful. Perhaps next time make your text a little bigger and clearer.
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This is lovely piece of writing John. You have created some wonderful examples of metaphors although I'm not sure if your sisters will enjoy their descriptions :-) I think the figurative language you used to describe your mum is beautiful. Perhaps next time make your text a little bigger and clearer.
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